Best Thing about Shrimp

The best thing about my book would be the different language when it says "She was not going to mess with the simple freedom either, and did not complain once as we climbed Divisadero Street, a street so steep not even buses will navigate that section of it--and "Diviz" is a major thoroughfare." Just the ways she says it seems different than what a normal book would say. The diction isn't similar to anything I have read before. Another things about this book that makes it good would be the title "Shrimp" by itself contrasting to any other book titles. The book cover is another good thing because it draws you in, the picture of a surf board with the girl standing next to it.